Cyrus Adding Detail To Sentences

Adding Detail To Sentences

WALT: add detail to sentences

You can add to the

beginning

middle

end

of simple sentences.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

At Camp Bentzon Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach which I needed on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course up high in the forest.

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I was nervous about sailing on camp.

When I saw the sailing boat I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was nervous because it was scary sailing on camp.

I was nervous about sailing on camp because I might fall out of the boat.

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We went abseiling.

On Thursday during the day we went abseiling.

We went with Brendon to abseiling.

We went abseiling on a big wall.