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Wednesday 28 August 2013

Pt England School Cross Country



My Introduction
I can’t believe the big day has arrived! It was our school cross country. I got ready and had a big healthy breakfast ready for my race.



Paragraph about: waiting,nervous
I was racing in the 10 years old boys. We arrived at the court and we had to line up in our age group .We had to wait really long while we had to sit on the court . When I was sitting on the count I was really nervous my heart was pounding. I was shaking with fear.  




Paragraph about: lining up at the star
It was our turn to race. I was really nervous my heart was pounding. Mrs Jarman called the 10 year old boys up. Mrs Jarman told us to go and line up at the line were Mr burnt was waiting.Mr Burt told us were to go.  





Paragraph about: Maddy course with puddles
When I was running I step in the mud it made me showdown. I was really lucky that I did not have my shoes on. The gooey mud oozed through my toes. When I step in the puddles I got my school shout wet.







Conclusion that makes my message clear
The Pt England school cross country was easy to run because I have been training for the big run.When I finished my run I was really proud of my efforts.I was really tired after the school cross country.





Wednesday 14 August 2013

Speech Marks


WALT - use speech marks to show direct speaking.


Fill in the Speech Marks:

Hibernates, said “the fox again.” “It means that he goes to sleep for the whole winter.”

“I am tired” the Hare said and then drifted off to sleep.

“Is that what you were after?” asked Sally.

“That’s incredible.” “He must be the laziest creature alive.” said the hare.

Tuesday 13 August 2013

Cyrus Jack And Magic Harp

Monday 12 August 2013

Jake And The Magic Harp Hat



Speech Marks


WALT - use speech marks to show direct speaking.

Fill in the Speech Marks:


“Good morning,” said the check-out lady. “Do you have your Fly Buys card?”

“I am tired the boy” said and then drifted off to sleep.


“What do you want to do when you grow up” said John.
“I don’t know” replied Dan “I might be a pilot.”

Tuesday 6 August 2013

Jack And The Magic Harp



130 Pt England Rd  
Point England
Auckland 1072





Dear Mum,
I am really sorry for selling the cow for something I wanted.Please forgive me for the wrongs I have done I will not do it again. I wanted to buy the bee and the harps for you and me to have I thought it will be fun for the both of us. please do not punish me I will not do it again.




Thank you
Jack


Cyrus The Three Little Pigs

Once upon a time there were three little pigs. They were all grown up and ready to seek their own fortune. They said “goodbye mum” and went to seek their own fortune.

The first little pig decided to buy some hay to build his house. The little pig gave some money to a man who own some hay. The little pig found a nice place to build his house. So the little pig went to build his house it was finished the little pig went to relax.

The big bad wolf smelt something tasty for dinner. The big bad wolf said “little pig little pig let me in”. The little pig said “not by the hairs of my chinny chin chin”. So the wolf said “I’ll huff  and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down” the hay went flying everywhere. The little pig tried to run away but the wolf ate the little pig.

The second little pig wanted to build his house with stick. He saw a man with some stick he gave the man some money the little pig found a great place to build his house. The little pig built his house and was really pleased with himself. So the little pig relax.

The big bad wolf smelt something really tasty.The big bad wolf said “little pig little pig let me in”. The pig said “not by the hairs of my chinny chin chin”. So the wolf said “I’ll huff  and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down” the stick went flying everywhere. The little pig tried to run away but the big bad ate the little pig.

The third little pig was the smartest. The little pig saw a man with some brick. So the little pig gave some money to the man. The little pig found a great spot in the sun. It took long for the little pig to finished. Finally it was done and the little pig was pleased with it.

The big bad wolf smelt something tasty. The big bad wolf said “little pig little pig let me in”. The pig said “not by the hairs of my chinny chin chin”. So the wolf said “I’ll huff  and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down”.The big bad wolf tried to blow the brick house down.

The big bad said “I need a new plan”. So the big bad wolf saw a chimney. The big Bad wolf went down the chimney .The little pig put a pot of hot water on the chimney The big bad wolf went down and into the pot and that was the end of the big bad wolf.

So the little pig live happily ever after.