My mum I really don’t know that much about because she goes to work when we are at school and finishes work when we are sleep. I see her in the morning when she drops us off to school and on sunday when we go to church. When my mum goes to church I go to sunday with my brother and sister so we don’t see her for 1 hours all more. If I can scale my na from 1 to 10 10 being the best and 1 not the best I will give her 9 because I never see here everyday if I did I would of gave her a 10.
Tuesday, 2 September 2014
My Na And My Mum
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Well done with this short story Cyrus! My favourite sentence is where you described your Nana and used similes to describe how she is strong but also soft. I wonder where else you could write similar sentences because they make your story much more exciting to read.
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