My nan is not like other nan’s i've met , she loves to cook, play cards and loves to watch The Voice, American Idol and The X-Factor . She is strong like hulk and soft like a rabbit. My nan is really busy when both of my baby cousin comes over, she has to cook their food and feed it to them and put them to sleep.If I can scale my na from 1 to 10 10 being the best and 1 not the best I will give her a 10 because she is the best at what she does.
My mum I really don’t know that much about because she goes to work when we are at school and finishes work when we are sleep. I see her in the morning when she drops us off to school, and on sunday when we go to church. When my mum goes to church I go to sunday school with my brother and sister so we don’t see her for 1 hours all more. If I can scale my na from 1 to 10 10 being the best and 1 not the best I will give her 9 because I never see here everyday if I did I would of gave her a 10.
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