Hi Cyrus, I know I am a stranger to your blog, but as I was going thought the blogs, I noticed the blog, so I decid to make a comment on it. I loved the photo and the sentences, But, I noticed that in the sentences that you got a bit muddled up when you said as you swim deeper the cold it gets, sorry to say it is actually, the deeper you swim the colder it gets! But nice work!
Hi Cyrus,
ReplyDeleteI know I am a stranger to your blog, but as I was going thought the blogs, I noticed the blog, so I decid to make a comment on it. I loved the photo and the sentences, But, I noticed that in the sentences that you got a bit muddled up when you said as you swim deeper the cold it gets, sorry to say it is actually, the deeper you swim the colder it gets! But nice work!